correction:Diary Jounal

March 29, 2013


【日本語での日記原文】

唐突ですが、日本の朝は納豆に限ります。
子供のころは卵と納豆を混ぜて食べていましたが、今は、少々生卵が苦手になりました。

聞くところによると、韓国人は生卵を食べないそうで、日本人が生卵をご飯にぶっかけて食べるという行為を、とても奇異に感じるそうです。もっと言えば、下品であるのだとも。

その話を聞いたとき、韓国は近くて遠い外国だなあと思いました。

話は変わりますが、ぼくは毎日早起きして絵を書いています。ぼくは絶対に画家になりたいからです。

読んでくれてありがとう。



【英語での日記原文と添削】


※[]は添削文

abrupt, nattou is best in japanese morning.

[ Japanese people think that nattou is best in the morning. ]

as a child eat a raw egg and nattou mix on rice dish. but nowaday I am weak .

[ As a child I ate a raw egg and nattou mix on rice. But nowadays I am weak.  ]

I hear a korean person is not eat raw egg. so, to korean person  think about very strange  a raw-egg-on rice dish are japanese. moreover also called vulgar.

[ I heard that korean people  do not eat raw eggs. So korean people think it is very strange that Japanese people eat a raw egg on rice. Moreover, it is also called vulgar. ]

When I know it topic, thinking korean is nearly and far country.  

[ I don't understand ! ]

Excuse me for changing the subject, but I get up early for painting. because I wanna be an artist.

[ (1)wanna → want to ]

Thank you for reading.



・teacher one's thoughts

Americans also think raw eggs on rice is strange.

I think testes good !

Good luck with your painting !

(1) "Wanna" is only used in speaking. Write "want to" when you are writing.



also：また
ate：eat の過去形